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Author: Star-Chan
Reviewer: Jaelliex3 @ Melancholic
Title: 5/5
I loved the title so much. I can't explain why but it connected with me for some reason.
Poster/BG: 8/10
It was good. It's just that I'm a designer and I see little things like the blend of two things. I saw a few things not blended properly, like it was overlapping the other picture wrongly, just watch out for this little things.
Forewords: 10/10
The forewords left me wanting for more. I wanted to keep reading until the end of it, it was really amazing. Good Job ^^
Plot: 15/15
The plot was really good. Boy meets girl but not in a really clichéd way. Not in the way where it gets too boring.
Creativity/Originality: 15/15
The one thing I love about this story is the way you portray both characters. They were both oblivious to what they feel for each other. To be honest I thought she was gonna die but I was happy she didn't so I like that about this one-shot, it didn't end up being sad. I also love the fact that she had to kiss his forehead once again to bring back the memory of him. I found it so sweet ;)
Flow: 10/10
I love each and every section of it. Nothing left me hanging. Every beginning and end of a sentence wanted me to just continue reading and not stop. Keep it up!
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabs: 9/10
Not much to pick on but just a little correction here and there. Not really a big issue so don't worry about it; just read over your work again!
Characterisation: 10/10
Like I said I love how you portray both character. ^^
Writing Stye: 10/10
I adore these sort of writings. The sophistication of the writing is really good. I really am practicing to write as sophisticated as this one. So good job!
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
From my previous comments isn't it a bit obvious? I LOVED THIS STORY! From forewords to the end of it.
Sub-total: 97/100
Bonus: 5/5
A bonus for making me cry! I love crying over stories, so thank you.
Total: 102/105
* Note: The result of this review is not because I know the writer. It's because I reviewed this story with so much honesty. Read the story to see for yourself, so please do not bash saying this writer doesn't deserve what they have recieved because this writer does deserve this.