Melancholic

Webmistress here

2011-04-20T23:29:00.000-07:00

Hi there right now I'm renovating this site from the start I apologize if I really dint watch this site before but now I am back now I am starting this site a new one so I'm hiring staffs right now like Graphics,Reviewer,Trailer

Signing out ,

Kyu

Staff

2009-04-30T00:58:00.000-07:00

Staffs (Hiring)
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Name:Dorky Kyu

Birthday:Dec 18th

Favourite(s): Sweets

Interest:BATTLE,Supernova,SHINee,JYJ,Infinite,Teen Top,Block B,B1A4

Hobbies:Listening to music

Position: Webmistress/ Graphics Designer/ Advertiser

Work Example(s) : x x x

Email:dedet_diaz@yahoo.com / sweet.lies_18@hotmail.com

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Name: MushieMonster

Birthday: January 1

Favorites: Food (Ice Cream, Egg Pie), Soft and Comfortable Beds *o*, Cookie Monster and Puppies!

Interest: SHINee, SNSD, f(x), B2ST and 4Minute

Hobbies: Graphic Designing

Position:Co-Webmistress,Graphic Designer

Works:x

Email: xkatrina.dariox@yahoo.com

Status

2008-07-05T07:49:00.000-07:00

Graphic Status

Review Status

Trailer Status

Request

2008-05-07T07:49:00.000-07:00

Graphic Request

Review Request

Trailer Request

One Shot Request

Staff

Blacklist

2008-04-30T17:42:00.001-07:00

No one atm xD

Portfolio

2008-04-30T17:42:00.000-07:00

Cancel Request

2008-04-30T17:41:00.000-07:00

Cancel Request

Icons

2008-04-30T04:33:00.000-07:00

Coming soon (:

Trailer PickUp

2008-04-30T04:07:00.000-07:00

Author: Snow Bang♥Noraebang
Story Title: OMONA
Trailer: OMONA TRAILER!
Trailer Maker: JaeLLie.x3 @ Melancholic

Autumn Memories - review

2008-04-30T03:08:00.000-07:00

Title: Autumn Memories
Author: Star-Chan
Reviewer: Jaelliex3 @ Melancholic

Title: 5/5
I loved the title so much. I can't explain why but it connected with me for some reason.

Poster/BG: 8/10
It was good. It's just that I'm a designer and I see little things like the blend of two things. I saw a few things not blended properly, like it was overlapping the other picture wrongly, just watch out for this little things.

Forewords: 10/10
The forewords left me wanting for more. I wanted to keep reading until the end of it, it was really amazing. Good Job ^^

Plot: 15/15
The plot was really good. Boy meets girl but not in a really clichéd way. Not in the way where it gets too boring.

Creativity/Originality: 15/15
The one thing I love about this story is the way you portray both characters. They were both oblivious to what they feel for each other. To be honest I thought she was gonna die but I was happy she didn't so I like that about this one-shot, it didn't end up being sad. I also love the fact that she had to kiss his forehead once again to bring back the memory of him. I found it so sweet ;)

Flow: 10/10
I love each and every section of it. Nothing left me hanging. Every beginning and end of a sentence wanted me to just continue reading and not stop. Keep it up!

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabs: 9/10
Not much to pick on but just a little correction here and there. Not really a big issue so don't worry about it; just read over your work again!

Characterisation: 10/10
Like I said I love how you portray both character. ^^

Writing Stye: 10/10
I adore these sort of writings. The sophistication of the writing is really good. I really am practicing to write as sophisticated as this one. So good job!

Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
From my previous comments isn't it a bit obvious? I LOVED THIS STORY! From forewords to the end of it.

Sub-total: 97/100

Bonus: 5/5

A bonus for making me cry! I love crying over stories, so thank you.

Total: 102/105

* Note: The result of this review is not because I know the writer. It's because I reviewed this story with so much honesty. Read the story to see for yourself, so please do not bash saying this writer doesn't deserve what they have recieved because this writer does deserve this.

Review Status

2008-04-30T00:31:00.000-07:00

none at the moment

Graphic Status

2008-04-30T00:30:00.000-07:00

none at the moment

Trailer Status

2008-04-30T00:26:00.000-07:00

{JaeLLie.x3}

- OMONA by Snowbang♥Noraebang
Your Guardian Angel by Asian_Innocence

Rules

2008-04-25T07:43:00.000-07:00

Graphics;

1) Do NOT request from us if you have already requested a graphic for the same story at another site. Respect those who design your graphics.

2) Please be patient with our designers, they will get the work done and give it to you as soon as they are done.

3) If you have decided that you will be cancelling your request please let us know ASAP. We don't want our graphic designers to be designing anything for nothing.

4) Links for pictures are needed, so please provide us a valid link.

5) You MUST use the graphic design once it's done. Both poster and background if you have requested it.

6) Please inform us your chosen designer. If the designer is unavailable we will be placing you under a different designer.

7) Do NOT claim the work as yours, give credits to the designer that spent time working on the designs.

8) Fail to follow any of these rules, your request can be ignored or you will be blacklisted.

9) If you have read the rules and have NOT violated any of it go click the "Request".

10)Password: Melancholic

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Reviews;

1) Please be patient with us. We too have our lives.

2) Your story must at least contain 4 chapters to be reviewed.

3) Please do NOT be offended with what we said in our review. Reviewers are here to help you improve for your further stories.

4) It is alright if you have already requested another review from another site. It is understadable that you seek for other people's opinions. x)

5) You MUST placed a review made from us into another chapter and it is also a MUST that you credit the reviewer for their hardwork.

6) Please provide us with a VALID URL link to your story.

7) If the reviewer you have asked for is not available note that we will be putting you under a reviewer that is available. But if you would like to wait then feel free to do so.

8) If you decided to cancel your request please let us know ASAP.

9) Failure to follow any of the rules leads to consequences. Your request will either be ignored or you will automatically be blacklisted.

10) If you read over the rules and know that you haven't violated any of them go click the "Request".

11)Password: Melancholic

Review Gradings;

Title: -/5
Poster/Background: -/10
Forewords: -/10
Plot: -/15
Creativity/Originality: -/15
Flow: -/10
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: -/10
Characterisation: -/10
Writing Style: -/10
Overall Enjoyment: -/5

Sub Total: -/100

Bonus: -/5

Total: -/100

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Trailers;

1) Please do NOT request from us if you have already requested from another site. Respect those hard working people.

2) Please do NOT request from other sites if you have already from us.

3) Please understand that trailers are made as FanFic teasers.

4) Please be patient with us, we are like you as well; we have lives. We will be informing you if the trailer you have requested will take more time to complete.

5) If you change your mind and no longer want a trailer from us please let us know ASAP. Click on ‘Cancel Request’ button

6) Please do NOT bash our trailer makers; it is really rude that way and they also have lives so please.

7) If you have read over the rules and know you haven’t violated any of it go click the "Request".

8)Password: Melancholic

Affies

2008-04-08T07:51:00.000-07:00

Link Us Lovelys ^_^

Our Wonderful Affies^^

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Pick ups

2008-04-05T07:50:00.000-07:00

Snow Bang♥Noraebang

Trailer

Yuki

Poster

Background

Jojun

Poster

Background

Muhhiro

Poster

Background

Asian_Innocence

Trailer

ShadowYin

Reviewer

.flavored

Reviewer

Star-Chan - Autumn Memories

Review